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{{BORN IN GRAVE}}

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Shayan-Nayash
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Left alone in slumber
Disgraced and humble
Deprived from a drop of joy
Played with like a toy
Hard on the fake surface
But breaking with fast pace
Rusty and forgotten like a plastic doll
And only dust covers my soul


It looks I've been born in grave
Trapped in a world of black and grey
And no one to comfort me
But only the whispers in my head which abhor me


being different enraptured me
Their cruelty Cage captured me
It looks they don't know what is humanity
Trapped here till eternity


It looks I've been born in grave
Trapped in a world of black and grey
And no one to comfort me
But only the whispers in my head which abhor me


Cried a thousand tears
Filled with illusional fears  
A beast with a broken heart
With an immortal scar
Made by their brutality art
Left behind
Melancholy fills my mind
My soul which was once kind
now shouts to me
"I'll wipe the world away
I will shine with depression ray"


It looks I've been born in grave
Trapped in a world of black and grey
And no one to comfort me
But only the whispers in my head which abhor me
...
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Faroohz
Concrete Poetry have a lot of rules regarding: length, rhyme, and verses.

each verse needs to have the same amount of lines as in first verse 3 line! all the verses three lines.
and rhymes needs to have the same end!

let me show you how:

First verse:
"Left alone in slumber
Disgraced and humble"

Slumber rhymes with tumbler, umber , lumber!!
or else it will be "near rhymes"
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but most of all, i really enjoyed it, it sounded amazing, loved the metaphors and the use of words.
Good job