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{{BORN IN GRAVE}}
Left alone in slumber
Disgraced and humble
Deprived from a drop of joy
Played with like a toy
Hard on the fake surface
But breaking with fast pace
Rusty and forgotten like a plastic doll
And only dust covers my soul

It looks I've been born in grave
Trapped in a world of black and grey
And no one to comfort me
But only the whispers in my head which abhor me

being different enraptured me
Their cruelty Cage captured me
It looks they don't know what is humanity
Trapped here till eternity

It looks I've been born in grave
Trapped in a world of black and grey
And no one to comfort me
But only the whispers in my head which abhor me
{{Seasons Of War}}
A year began with the call of war
Spring which was like birth of a star
now has become an unsealable scar
Roses started to wither in war's presence
Death and doom were named nature's present

A season passed and hearts were broken
All that remained from a child was a token
A rag doll which saw humans brutality
A rag doll which was missing true humanity

Summer passed and autumn came
Conflict between humans couldn't be tamed
Remaining yellow and orange leaves started to fall from the trees
Which Indicated Lost lives of humans which will never be free

Autumn fled and when everything was dead
Snow of winter covered remnants of huma
FURIOUS FIST IN FACE OF MIND MANIPULATION MASTERS
HIDDEN VIOLENCE
FAKE GUIDANCE

Manipulation masters grinning in silence
Building National barricades
Making unholy crusades
And when everything is done they just fade away
And right now they say:
"Our way is the best way
Fight for a better day
We will shape the history"

But in the conclusion of story
An eternal descend
A bitter tearful end

People for them just like a torch in night
Oiled and waiting to ignite
Taking from them the true sight
Building their house of lies in new heights
Manipulating, their hobby to show their own might
Hiding the unfulfilled humans rights
Our minds toys for their fights
Trying to dim the reaso
Shadow Of A Soul
Another day you can't open your eyes sun shines on your face as your mind is burning to ashes.
You are lost in these meaningless days you want to shout but you can't even talk.
Nothing is important now but you can't forget the dark nights which you are fully awake in them just like the day after them.
The Unwanted things you want to do start again
Fake smiles and bitter vigorous tries
An eternal sadness in your meaningful eyes, rotting in your dreams the reason of your bitter life.

Alone, tired and broken with two chained wings
Just like a black and white book Covered by dust
Somehow old like a forsaken keepsake
In your every page i
Better Than Me
"Everybody's got a talent"
That's what my papa used to say
"Everybody is unique
In his or her own special way."

"But Papa," I said
"Are you sure about that?
What about me?
What am I good at?"

"Well," he replied
Leaning against the wall
"You can sing, you can draw
You can write, that's best of all."

But Papa is a liar
I can't do all that stuff
When I sing, I'm off key
When I draw, I screw up

When I write? I don't know
It's not exactly talent
I guess I'm pretty good
But I wouldn't say I have it

Everyone's got talent
Everyone but me
Everybody's better
Papa, can't you see?

I'm not good enough
No matter how hard I try
I'm
{{GAME OVER}}
You will tremble before me

Paying for your sinful deeds

I will swallow your dying breath

As you wallow in sea of death

I'll break your fragile neck

Your only remnant will be a wreck

As you see glory of Vengeance in me

I will cast upon you,it's beauty

As you realize my pain

Under droplets of rain

You realize through what I came

To this cursed land of shame

I will fight you till the depth of hell

To the core of where darkness is held

As you are getting lower and lower

You'll realize that the game is over
HeroThey say you need a lion's heart,
Beating inside your chest,
Or a hero's mind, which knows no fear,
To guide your steps, to push you on.

On towards that fear of yours:
That burning house, those eyes too cold,
That shadow lurking in the darkness
Of the empty factory.

They say you can't gain it,
They tell you: "you don't have it!"
That incredible bravery
that burns inside a hero's soul.

You read of it in books,
You hear of it in tales,
You see it in movies,
That bravery a hero needs.

You heard of those brave knights
Who faced dragons and witches,
Those evil beings created by darkness
And living on fear.

And you wish you wer
MeOnce loathed and disdained
Self distrust ran heavy through hardened veins

There was no sun, no light
Not a single friend in sight

It was just life, nothing more nor less

My life...colored my days grey

A seed sown into poor soil laden with rock
At last has bloomed into a fantastic rose
I like
I love the smell of blood
that teases my  nostrils

I like the taste of blood
when i feel

this thick liquid
down in my throat

I can not help from killing
to regain this sensations

kill again and again
this need is so inked in my nature
it drives me crazy
resist is not possible

has Each moon
I make victims
ever more

because I like to see blood

see the terror in their eyes
feel the fear of dying

grab their body
UsEvery face has an eye, every eye has a sight,
To seek and know, what is wrong and right.
Every sight has a vision, every vision has a dream.
And every dream has a future, to find, to fight.

Every face has an ear, every ear hears a tale,
Of good and bad, success or fail.
Every tale has an end, every end has a hope,
And every hope can live no matter fire or hail.

Every face has a heart, every heart has a soul,
To lead the world to that one last goal.
Every soul has a voice, to speak and to trust,
And every voice, is one of us.
The Last Battle
As I stand on top of a cliff

I look down to the Endless Enemy Armies

SLUMBER,OBLIVION,PRIDE,THIEVES&HUNGER

And killing all of us is their craving

As I touch the last fallen leaf of a tree

I feel the caress of wind and breeze

Giving me a farewell for the battle that is to come

They Whisper to me we will help you in this last battle till they are gone

Cause all you fight for are hopes,dreams

We help you to bring back freedom

Now I can hear the beat of Drums sound

My last tears slowly fall on the ground

I grasp my Sword and shield to protect my loved ones

I feel that my death is awaiting so let it come

I charge to the heart of enem
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Lost Love
From the day we were born  
we were treated like a thorn
When we were ragged and worn  
they done nothing but made us torn
Where did the  promise of their True love go?
Like an arrow released from a bow
It reached our heart and broke it

I can hear my heart burning
Deep inside Yearning
Desperately turning
Your heart made me see distant flames
But now you're gone and All I can see is my heart's blames
Now my mind is learning
Mistakes I've been making
My soul is burning
All the time hurting

Love is a four letter word
Is it spoken here?
Hate is a four letter word
Is it Imprisoned?
In the end of this day      
I will bring

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[[FEELINGS WITHIN ME AND YOU]]

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Rage is a flame
Sleeping and untamed
A beast in chains
Waiting for a chance To howl trough my head like a train
Creates an endless war in me
Irresistible even if I flee

Revenge is a rain
Made of blood and hate
And you will realize this only when it is late
Follows you in a dark and lone lane
Flows through you and you'll never be the same

Sorrow is a name
Name of the misery created by those who are to blame
A bullet for dreams and days
A black crow which never flies away

Shame is a game
A game won or lost the same
A feeling which never lets you fly
No matter how much you try

Stress is like a formal dress
We must wear it all the time nevertheless
An unbeatable and everlasting feeling
An invisible and fearsome ceiling

Lust a castle made of dust
We yearn to reach it at all cost
An illusionary dream for all of us
A fake sun made by the reflection of frost

These are the demons that for defeating them we strive
Which will be with us for the rest of our lives

By Shayan Shahsavary

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[[FEELINGS WITHIN ME AND YOU]]by ~Shayan-Nayash

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Critique by `Infinite-Heart Jul 2, 2012, 12:16:39 PM
Very powerful and deep. I can see lots thought went into this. It's got quite a meaning and most of this is true.

On the more technical hand, I like many aspects of this piece.
The structure is good, yet I'd add a bit more variety. The word choices and phrases are really creative as well. The have a certain depth to them. Some, though, seem to sacrifice a touch of impact to keep the rhyme scheme, which is also quite interesting.

The phrasing and metaphors are outstanding. It offers quite a unique point of view and I really like that. It seems to take your mind for a powerful ride, sending all kinds of persepctives at you.

Well done, I like your style. It has a few minor chops in it, but overall, polished and from the soul.
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=Riemea Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, you amaze me! This is another very well written and deep poem.

I really like the metaphors you created, they paint a very vivid picture of your ideas. I also like that you wrote a paragraph for each of the "demons" we have to defeat, and the last two lines somehow remind me of a concluding couplet in a Shakespearean Sonnet. The internal rhymes you have in the first line of every paraghraph are very well done, too, it pulls the reader's attention to those lines.

Another very good work, well done!
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Mood: Love ~Shayan-Nayash Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow amazing comment and compliment and even noticing Shakespear makes me proud thanks a lot :)
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=Riemea Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Again, you're very welcome! I like Shakespeare's sonnets a lot, so it's only natural for me to notice things like that ;)
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=hefeigal Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful job!
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~Shayan-Nayash Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot :)
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~Lorzzy Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the poem and picture :D
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Mood: Affection ~Shayan-Nayash Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a lot :)
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~Lorzzy Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome :)
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~KronosPayne Jun 29, 2012
If you drew the picture, I deeply enjoy it. The contrast between the two sides and anatomy is fantastic. Also highly enjoy how the background adds to the picture without distracting from the figure. The poem is well written and follows an very simple but effective pattern. My only concern would be that the rhythm of some of the phrases seems like it has slight hiccups in it. It may just be me though. Very well done though and thanks for sharing. (sorry for any words spelled wrong on a computer that does not have spell check xD)
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Mood: Affection ~Shayan-Nayash Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
First of all thanks for taking time to write this comment And I wanted to say that the whole picture is not mine but I have worked on the colors,contrast and BG and thanks for liking my poem Trying to make better works in future[and you didn't spell anything wrong :)]
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